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HBS 2010 application essays- My analysis

Posted by lavzz on May 29, 2009

HBS has released its essay questions for fall 2010.  Here is my take on them

1. What are your three most substantial accomplishments and why do you view them as such? (600-word limit)

One of HBS’ long standing questions, this is also according to me the simplest of the lot once you have selected which 3 achievements to portray. Leadership should  of course come through strongly in all 3 accomplishments. Quantifiable results are generally easier to portray but if  the applicant has examples of leadership and achievement in softer areas like community or personal values, it could show some diversity in the application. My suggestion is to keep the language simple and try to cover 3 different areas of expertise among work, community, extras, academics etc.

2. What have you learned from a mistake? (400-word limit)

This essay if reflected upon correctly can make or break the application. Remember that they do not expect the applicant to be gods gift to humanity and they expect that he/she makes mistakes, learns from them and corrects themselves. Reflecting on the mistake and taking corrective steps and then showing improvment would be an ideal way to frame the essay.

3. 1- What would you like the MBA Admissions Board to know about your undergraduate academic experience?

This is an ideal essay for early career applicants as it creates the right platform for them to tell the ad com about their undergrad experience. As they have asked specifically about academic experience, it makes sense to write about some good examples of leadership or teamwork resulting from an academic project or experience from undergrad.

3.2- Discuss how you have engaged with a community or organization.

This is a good essay for people involved in non-profit or community experience to highlight their role and results. This should be chosen only for those with significant community experience and not to speak of the one time that the applicant volunteered to donate clothes for the under privileged.

3.3- Tell us about a time when you made a difficult decision

New essay for this year’s application but goes well considering their overall theme of leadership and decision making skills. if the applicant has an experience in which he/she has had to take a decision/risk without having complete information or has had to take a call in the face of adversity and then has stood by it despite opposition will be  a great example.

3.4- Write a cover letter to your application introducing yourself to the Admissions Board.

I was a little surprised seeing this essay introduced newly for this year as it generally tends to repeat some of the stuff written about in earlier essays. A good applicant will be able to use this essay to identify an underlying theme to all other essays and highlight the same. This will be a tough one to write without making the adcom sleep. Best to avoid it if possible.

3. 5-What is your career vision and why is this choice meaningful to you?

Standard career and long term goals essay.  The applicant should remember that the adcom is asking for a vision and so necessarily it may be on a theoretical frame. But if he/she can make it sound convincing , it can be a winner. For those applicants whose long term visions with respect to careers are still evolving, it would be better to let this one go.

I had spent a month and a half writing/reading/editing the HBS essays. All the best for all the applicants out there. I had a great time writing them. You should too.

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ISB essays

Posted by lavzz on June 30, 2008

ISB has come out with its essays for the class of 2010. It has stuck to its traditional stingy word limit and has also given out a fresh set of essays keeping with its style of new essays every year. Anyways, here are the essays 

Essay 1 
Please give three reasons why ISB should admit you into the class of 2010. These reasons should ideally differentiate you from your competition. (300 words max)

Essay 2 

You are contesting the election to be the President of the ISB Student Body. Write a speech you will deliver to the student body on why they should elect you as the President? (300 words max)

Essay 3 
CASE : You have been appointed to head the team to build a dam across the River Zumba. Success in this project is critical for your company and would earn you a promotion. Failure would mean that your company would be bankrupt and will take along with it, its investors and its employees. Building a dam across the river would result in deforestation of a portion of the rainforests and would mean relocation of the tribals and destabilization of wild life at Zumba. There is resistance from environmental groups against your project. You are meeting the head of the resistance movement in one hour wherein you would have to explain your decision. Describe what you would do and why? (You will be evaluated on the creativity and practicality of your solution).

The third one looks like the toughest given the 300 word limit. It has an ethical/moral construct and will be a challenge to write it. The first which asks for differentiation is the best essay for anyone belonging to a non- IT or non- engg. background to showcase their uniqueness wrt to competition. The second essay is the best to bring out ones extracurricular, leadership and personal traits like communication etc.
I have kept a personal deadline of july 15th for essay 1, july end for essay 2 and august 15th for essay 3. Lets see how it goes.
 
cheers
LM 

 

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Its essay time

Posted by lavzz on June 30, 2008

Am done with my GMAT. Not entirely happy with my score. After almost 20 days of introspection about whether I should or not re-take the test, have finally decided not to. It borders on the average score in most of the top ten schools and slightly less than average for ISB. Anyways, no point brooding about it now. Will write my observations on the GMAT in some other post. 

Have more or less frozen on my school list. The details- 

ISB (Indian school of business)-
More than anything else, the recent FT ranking where it shows ISB as number 20 above schools like Kellogg has probably changed my opinion towards this school. Honestly last year, I was not even considering it. 
It comes at one-fifth the price of a US B school, is located in my home country, infact my home state, and has good placements. My long term goal is to work in India. So I think it all fits. 

Stanford GSB- 
The brand name, the class size, california, weather…. lots of pros. Very few cons. 

Harvard 
The brand name. Period. 

So I have started off with the ISB essay 1 as of now. Will post my essay analysis for the same soon.

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